The Hero and the Sage, Reincarnated and Engaged, Vol. 7

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By Washiro Fujiki and Heiro. Released in Japan as “Eiyū to Kenja no Tensei Kon: Katsute no Kōtekishu to Konyaku Shite Saikyō Fūfu ni Narimashita” by HJ Bunko. Released in North America by J-Novel Club. Translated by Joey Antonio.

I will admit, I was a little irritated by the end of this volume. The whole series has been building to an obvious climax, and we get it here. I’ve talked before about how absolutely nothing challenges our main couple in any fight… except, of course, when they are fighting each other. As such, it makes perfect sense who the final boss is going to be, and it also makes sense that for once Raid does almost die. I wish Eluria also got to do cool fight stuff, but the nature of the battle means that she has to take care of the “journey to the center of the mind” stuff, which is also well handled, with a discussion of magic that genuinely says “murder is OK”, like the meme… provided, of course, you are the murderer and the people being killed are proven to be bad. It’s a really good ending to the series. BUT. Grr.

Raid and Eluria are finally ready to take care of fixing the First World’s polluted mana problem, mostly as we’ve finally figured out how to teach Raid to use magic. It will come as a surprise to no one that the way Raid uses magic is basically just “punch and sword things, but with magic”. They then go to the Divine Realm, which is basically Heaven, to meet up with elderly Raid, who is a Sage, and the one who set the stage for Raid the Hero. Sadly, Raid the Sage spent much of his life either stealing other people’s ideas using his future sight so he got the credit, or watching a young girl invent magic, despair as people used it for war, and destroy the world. He’s tried to find the timeline where he can change her fate, but was unable to. Now he needs Raid and Eluria to do it, which should be easier than expected, as the young girl is Eluria herself.

Again, most of this is great. The love gossip part was very amusing, featuring a ton of women who are very bad at realizing they’re in love, and Eluria, who also used to be that but got better. Raid’s mom is a stitch, and I like how her reaction to “I’m going to near-certain death and may not come back” is basically “OK, but come back anyway”. The engagement party would be a wedding, were this a final volume, and Eluria’s letter is adorable, as well as Raid’s proposal. The way the conflict is resolved works thematically, and we get to see Raid actually struggle for once, as well as fall into a month-long coma. Unfortunately… the series isn’t over. Now there’s a demon lord. For Chrissakes. You had a great ending! Why keep going?

So yeah, we’ll be back with Book 8, though it’s not out in Japan yet, so get ready to wait. Or pretend the book ended here with a wedding instead.

Reluctant Space Commander: From Death Wish to Galactic Hero!, Vol. 1

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By Norasiro and John Dee. Released in Japan as “”Koko wa Makasete Saki ni Ike!” o Shitai Shinitagari no Nozomanu Uchuu Gekokujou” by TO Books. Released in North America digitally by Airship. Translated by Kim Davis. Adapted by Mark Brezinski.

This book has so many flaws I don’t even know where to begin, so I might as well start with what I did like. The core plot and concept is a good one. Making Legend of the Galactic Heroes only staffing it with petty Japanese office workers is something that could be amusing. The series relies on “nobles good and get the good assignments, poor orphans bad and should know their place”, and knows that it’s something bad and needs to change. And… hrm, I’ve now come to the end of the things I like. That’s a problem, as I have a ways to go for this review. I can’t even say this book was bad and do a rant, because the book doesn’t even deserve a rant. The author simply doesn’t know how to write characters. Even the “eccentric girls” in this story are faceless and you forget which one is which. And the hero is a potato-kun… at least after the first part.

Nao is an orphan who’s all set to take the exams to get into an elite college… but he fails. And then is dumped by his girlfriend. Who reveals that even before he failed she was getting into polyamorous orgies with the most attractive guy in their orphanage. Orgies which they show Nao a video of. (Honestly, the first scene made me wonder if this was a parody of “incel” fantasies, but no.) Despondent, Nao tries to jump off a cliff but hasn’t got the nerve. So he decides to join the military, so he can die in battle. He somehow ends up in the elite Military School for Officers… he’s not sure why… but since his grades are intellect 100%, soldier ability 0%, he’s sent off to the Coast Guard, the least important part of the military, and from there assigned to the losers unit in the Coast Guard. How can he possibly have a glorious death now? Especially since it turns out he’s really good at commanding.

Nao is whiny, useless, and constantly talking about killing himself at select times during this book. When he’s not doing that, he’s a void where a person should be. He commands a group of thirty young woman, who are all supposedly there as they’re difficult to command and eccentrics… except, for the most part, they act like elite soldiers. Yes, one is an engineer who likes to take stuff apart, but she’s far too reserved for the role. Another accidentally chokes her commander out… and it’s the one thing she does. On reflection, there is one other thing I liked about the book. Despite being surrounded by hot women under his command, and also meeting up with an elder-sister childhood friend from the orphanage *and* a royal princess, both the characters and the author are not interested in romance at all, and there’s zero fanservice – except at the start, in the NTR bit. Which honestly reads like a different series.

I may actually read a second volume of this for the plot. But I don’t recommend it. Try Dorky NPC Mercenary instead, which does much the same thing but at least has better character writing. Also, if you cut out the naval protocol part of this book, it would be 55 pages long.

Goodbye, Overtime! This Reincarnated Villainess Is Living for Her New Big Brother, Vol. 8

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By Chidori Hama and Wan Hachipisu. Released in Japan as “Akuyaku Reijō, Brocon ni Job Change Shimasu” by Kadokawa Beans Bunko. Released in North America by J-Novel Heart. Translated by Rymane Tsouria.

We’ve now caught up with the series in Japan, for the most part (I think the new volume comes out there this month), so it’s worth checking to see if this series is anywhere near a conclusion. The trouble is, if I’m being honest, the series could end anytime, but can also be stretched to 45 books. The conflict is “these two are so brocon/siscon that they will never allow anyone else to be a romantic partner”, with a side order of obliviousness on Ekaterina’s part. Once someone sits them down and says that they need to actually make a decision, and no, they can’t just marry each other, then the series will resolve itself. The only other real romantic conflict is the fact that Flora is also in love with Ekaterina, and, like most series with a Maria Campbell in them that’s a bit less yuri than Bakarina, it’s not really that much of a conflict. That said, none of that happens here, so we move on.

Despite all her best efforts, Ekaterina has been amazing again and attracted the attention of the entire school and empire. That said, the festival must go on. With a little bit of politics, as we meet Vladimir’s little sister, who is adorable and also has a brother complex… as well as a very different description of what Vladimir is like than the one Ekaterina has been fed. Interesting. In other festival news, Mikhail’s cooking is so popular that it’s impossible to get through the line without claiming noble privilege, which Ekaterina would rather not do. And then there’s the closing ceremonies, where the voting determines who was the best class and also the best person at the festival. Take a wild guess. With all this going on, with Ekaterina still have time to go to the ball with her big brother, rather than making an actual decision to affect her future?

If I sound like I’m getting a bit bored with the premise, it’s because I am. I appreciate the author not giving this any incest subtext, but I also would like the two siblings to actually marry other people, and I’m not confident the author wants to pull 6that trigger yet, so we wait. Certainly the narrative is aware of it. Ekaterina’s narrative voice occasionally slips into future tense, where she points out how she could never have knows what the consequences would be, or castigating herself for being oblivious. I did like the final chapter, where they go to visit Flora’s adopted parents and we get some backstory again. What’s seen by our heroine as “my grandmother was bullying people again!” turns out to have been far darker and more twisted, as I think when you are arranging a marriage for the girl you don’t like to a man known for beating his wife to death, it has passed bullying and moved to psychopathy.

In any case, this gives everyone who enjoys this series what they want, but not more than what they want.