Private Tutor to the Duke’s Daughter: The Celestial Spear, Successor to the Star

By Riku Nanano and cura. Released in Japan as “Koujo Denka no Kateikyoushi” by Fujimi Fantasia Bunko. Released in North America by J-Novel Club. Translated by William Varteresian.

Aside from the incredibly complicated plot, and the “who will Allen end up with” parts, for the most part this series’ most interesting subplot has been “when will everyone finally succeed at making Allen into a noble?”. Admittedly, one of the biggest obstacles to pulling this off has been Allen himself, whose genuine low self-esteem is matched only by his crafty ability to try to escape getting credit for things. Because he has experienced what people think of the beast tribe, and also what people think of him personally. Man, a lot of people just hate Allen on site, don’t they? Allen tends to be famous for a few things: 1) being the one who made Lydia who she is today (and is now doing the same with Tina); 2) Allen solving every single major incident of the last year or so; and 3) Allen having a very small amount of mana. That last one, possibly even more than his bloodline or lack thereof, is what leads folks to be absolutely furious at him. And in this book, that proves fatal.

Despite the aftermath of the previous volume, the aforementioned fatalities, and a really big fight near the end, for the most part this is the relaxing volume I had hoped for. The entire cast ,minus Ellie (who gets a scene showing how far she’s come but you still sense the author doesn’t know what to do with her) and Cheryl (back being a princess) are headed to the Yustinian capital, there to meet an Alice who is increasingly getting unable to perform her hero-ly duties (and trying to hide it) and her brother Igna, who has a bad case of jealousy and envy, and it’s all pointed at Allen. Also coming along is Lily, and we get a lovely flashback showing how they first met, and giving a little more insight into Lily’s desire to be a maid (which, I remind you, in this world is basically “assassin/spy/soldier who serves tea”). Oh yes, and the Emperor wants to see Allen and Caren, commoners or no. That might be hard.

I was actually faked out by one scene in here showing Lydia, Stella and Alice all agreeing to something after looking through ancient laws no one uses anymore. A lot of folks have been divided into camps in terms of “which girl will win”, and we know which camp I’m in. I had assumed this was some sort of polygamy thing, and was surprised Lydia went along. But in fact it’s nothing of the sort. If Allen can’t get a title or a noble house in his own country, well, let’s give him one from a different country. He really can’t weasel out of this, though he tries. It’s not helped that his sister is over the moon about it (and we’re also reminded how much she’s done to save the world – really everyone in Allen’s generation is a superhero. Caren knows that an Allen with a title is an Allen who will get the recognition he deserves. Though she may be less wild about Allen needing to get married, which I think may also be an issue.

And bad news to fans of the books: if you’ve seen the anime running this summer, you now have to preface recommending them with “It’s better than that, I promise”. Still, readers of Book 16 will definitely enjoy Book 17.

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