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Making Magic: The Sweet Life of a Witch Who Knows an Infinite MP Loophole, Vol. 1

By Aloha Zachou and Tetubuta. Released in Japan as “Maryoku Cheat na Majo ni Narimashita: Sōzō Mahō de Kimamana Isekai Seikatsu” by GC Novels. Released in North America by J-Novel Club. Translated by Emily Hemphill.

A lot of new writers these days tend to start off writing fanfiction of their favorite series, or of the popular series of the time. The good authors know how to skillfully take the original world and add their own take and characterization to it. The less good authors simply rewrite the original as prose, adding the occasional difference but largely having events go the same way. I am starting to feel that way about a lot of these “reincarnated into a fantasy world with OP stats” books. They may have different villages, or dungeons, and this one at least lacks a harem of slave girls (instead having a golem daughter-figure… I’ll go with daughter as the alternative skeeves me), but for the most part if you’ve read Kuma Kuma Kuma Bear, you’ve pretty much read the same sort of things that happen here. It’s not a good sign when even the chapter titles are pleasant but boring.

We start off with our main character dying and meeting God. We don’t hear a single thing about their past life, though they appear to have been a woman named Chise. In any case, God reincarnates her into a different world, and she chooses ‘Creation Magic’ as her one cheat skill that gods inevitably give dead people in this genre. Ending up in the middle of absolutely nowhere, Chise slowly begins to figure out how this world works and how her powers work. Very, very slowly. Eventually she creates a golem, and then by feeding the golem magic stones the golem evolves into Teto, a very strong and naive young woman who is deeply devoted to Chise. Together, the two of them rescue adventurers, gather herbs, fight ogres, and help a village to acquire basic survival skills.

This is from Micro Magazine’s GC Novels imprint, and I’ve talked before about how this imprint seems to have a very high miss ratio for me. I’m afraid this is another one. It improves in the second half with the village, and when it tries to focus on the fact that as a consequence of Chise raising her magic powers so high she’s also accidentally making herself immortal. Unfortunately, the first half is an absolute slog, especially for non-gamers who do not care how Chise tries various ways to kill things, or create things, or raise her magic. Also, and I blame the editors more than the translator here, one thing Chise creates to help her level up is named, repeatedly, a “strange fruit”. Even if that was its name in the Japanese romanji, or if it turns out it’s a familiar RPG thing, it should have been changed to ‘weird fruit’ or ‘bizarre fruit’ or something similar. Please google the words, or search on Spotify, if you don’t already know why.

If you’re a fan of overpowered characters who look like 12-year-olds walking around being incredibly powerful… there are STILL better books to read than this one.

Accomplishments of the Duke’s Daughter, Vol. 7

By Reia and Haduki Futaba. Released in Japan as “Koushaku Reijou no Tashinami” by Kadokawa Books. Released in North America by Seven Seas. Translated by Andria Cheng.

If the first book in the “Accomplishments of the Duchess” prequel was about discovering the hellion that Merellis once was, this volume is about showing us how she came to be the woman we know from the main series. In essence, this is also a book about her training for battle, it’s just the battles she’s going to face are in society rather than in the military, and the enemy is anyone who dares to look down on her. And, frankly, she takes to this just as well as she took to being a swordswoman. Frankly, as I’ve said before, Accomplishment of the Duke’s Daughter is not a series to read if you want to see protagonists struggling valiantly against impossible odds. For the most part, it’s about seeing women kick ass, in a variety of settings. In that regard, this volume works perfectly fine. And, in case you were worried we’d lose the awesome swordplay and butchering of enemies, no worries, we get a bit of that as well.

There is an ominous beginning, where Merellis’ father forbids her from taking up the sword and announces she’s going to be engaged to be married to the son of Duke Armelia, a political marriage. She suffers greatly over this for about five pages, but the reader is in on the joke, so we know everything will be fine once she figures out who the duke’s son is. After that it’s just a matter of shifting gears. If she can protect the most people around her through politics rather than the blade, then politics it is. As such, Louis’ mother gives Merellis a crash course in nobility, something she has assiduously been avoiding for the past several years. Just in time too, as it’s time for her to make her debut and attend the academy. Let’s hope it goes smoother for her than it did for her daughter…

I enjoyed seeing how Merellis’ training in military and the sword can be of use to her in society, particularly in how she watches the way people move and stand. Twins who are indebted to her father for saving their lives arrive at the estate, and Merellis can tell very rapidly that a) they have some basic fighting skills, and b) they’re OK to trust. These skills will serve her well. The book’s pacing is sometimes a problem, and sometimes the plots it drops can be more ominous than intended – Merellis’ old maid injures herself and is forced to return home, and there is a suggestion that she will die… which she may indeed have done, as we never hear from her for the rest of the book. It’s at times like these that the series shows off its seat-of-the-pants webnovel roots.

Fans of the main series may still be a bit put off that Iris is only in the wraparound at the start and end of this, but for those who found her mother to be a cool character, good news, here’s more of her.

Death’s Daughter and the Ebony Blade, Vol. 2

By Maito Ayamine and Cierra. Released in Japan as “Shinigami ni Sodaterareta Shoujo wa Shikkoku no Tsurugi wo Mune ni Idaku” by Overlap Bunko. Released in North America by J-Novel Club. Translated by Sylvia Gallagher.

It’s probably time to bring up Michael Moorcock and the series Elric of Melnibone, a series that I’m 100% sure that Maito Ayamine has read over and over again. This particular light novel series happens to feature a silver-haired protagonist who wields a sword that supposedly takes the souls of those it kills and gives them to their patron. Which, well, is exactly what happens in Elric as well. That said, Death’s Daughter and the Ebony Blade does not remotely have a sense of tragedy or pathos in it, running instead on “gosh, that murderous military scamp, isn’t she adorable?”. In the Elric series, you can be reasonably certain that everyone around Elric, particularly his love interests or close friends, will die. Olivia has Ashton has her not-quite-love interest, and Claudia as her “in my heart, this is an OTP” best friend/morality chain, but I have little worry that they’ll be killed off anytime soon. The same can’t be said for anyone else on the side of the Empire.

After the events of the first book, Olivia has gotten a bit of a reputation. In fact, she’s being called a monster, something she is not happy with. (Later she gets upgraded to “God of Death”, which pleases her much more). The book rapidly becomes a series of battles where the moral of the story is “if Olivia is here, or able to get here in the nick of time, we will win. Otherwise, bad things will happen.” The Empire tries sending some of its strongest warriors to fight her, and then a few of its generals. The outcome is the same. It helps that she has Ashton’s tactics, of course, which are also rapidly being appreciated more and more, by her allies if not by the Empire. Can someone come along that causes Olivia to reflect on what she has become? Or is it just “I want to eat delicious cake and butcher enemies, and this town has no cake?”.

In case it was not crystal clear, you should only be reading this series if you have no trouble with a moral void of a main character. In any other series, Olivia would be the terrifying villain. Indeed, I was sort of expecting Claudia to turn to Ashton at some point, possibly after Olivia had decided on the blood and skulls-themed family name as the one she’ll take going forward, and say “Are we the baddies?”. No, you’re not, but that’s really only because there are no goodies in this book, really. Everything can be abandoned in the name of military victory. There is some lip service paid to what it means to be a good lord of a city, in terms of protecting the people who live in that city from harm, but even there the lesson is taught by the execution of the errant lord.

Essentially, this is a very dark series, but it’s not written in a dark manner. It’s written as if this is Haruhi Suzumiya with a sword. That sort of dissonance is probably what makes it interesting.