By Kobako Takara and Jun Natsuba. Released in Japan as “Heroine ni Konyakusha wo Torareru Mitai node, Akuyaki Reisoku (Yandere Character) wo Neraimasu” by B’s-Log Bunko. Released in North America by Cross Infinite World. Translated by Emma Schumacker.

One of the problems that a lot of fiction has, be it in English or Japanese, is the trouble with sequels. In North America it feels like you can’t sell a fantasy series these days without it being a trilogy of some sort. Japanese books are frequently contest winners, which means they’re self-contained in one volume, but if they do well then more volumes are always around the corner. And sometimes a series just doesn’t need to be ongoing. This is the trouble I’m running into with the second volume of Yandere Villain. It felt very self-contained when I finished the first book, even though we hadn’t hit a wedding. And now we have a second book, which introduces the inevitable plot complications, and it feels very half-baked. I feel as if the author didn’t really have a plan, so decided to write what they like instead. Which is good news if you like fluff and bratty teens.

Having gotten engaged and solved their immediate issues, Cynthia and Siraiya are ready for a nice, relaxing vacation at her family’s hot springs hotel. All to themselves, where Cynthia dreams of growing closer as a couple… though she’ll find over the course of this book that, due to no sex ed at all, Siraiya is not remotely ready for anything physical. Unfortunately for both of them, the crown prince shows up at the hotel as well… and he’s got cat ears and a tail. This turns out to be due to a book he opened, but Cynthia knows it’s really the subject of a special event in the game world. Unfortunately, this isn’t a game world, and there’s an actual power struggle between Adelberd and his younger brother. Cat ears and a tail are probably not going to win points. Can Cynthia find a way to break the curse? And wait, now the second prince is here as well!

I will admit, the author has a way of writing a bratty teen who’s forced into power struggles he doesn’t want and wants to be more mature than he really is. Rutherford feels very true to life. He also ground on my every nerve, especially when he developed his puppy love crush on Cynthia. We also finally get to meet Adelberd’s fiancée Estellise, and they too have a “oh no, but if we hold hands that would be far too much!” issue. Clearly the otome game they’re from is very G-rated. On the bright side, I did like the resolution of the plot, which allowed Cynthia to save the day in a completely ridiculous way. And the fact that the Japanese word ‘yandere’, unknown here, has been taken by everyone but Cynthia to have a completely positive and not creepy at all meaning is an amusing running gag.

There’s two more volumes apparently, but I think I’m stopping here. The final volume has a wedding cover, so I assume things go well. Which is… not what actual yandere fans want, I think? But oh well.

By Kobako Takara and Jun Natsuba. Released in Japan as “Heroine ni Konyakusha wo Torareru Mitai node, Akuyaki Reisoku (Yandere Character) wo Neraimasu” by B’s-Log Bunko. Released in North America by Cross Infinite World. Translated by Emma Schumacker.

I admit I did briefly roll my eyes at the ineptness of the antagonists at the start of this book. The titular fiance is a drip of a man who our main character immediately falls out of love with after she gains her memories from Japan. The heroine is one of those who doesn’t actually care about walking up to the crown prince of their nation and saying “wow, great CG art!”. The “yandere villain” is being abused by his family, whose father is actually decently evil but whose brothers are so dumb they can’t even pretend that our main character is anything but a convenient woman to stay home while they play around. It then occurred to me that despite all this, both main characters have to struggle to get what they want, and still barely do. It’s almost like evil does not have to be competent or smart to succeed. Some lessons to learn there for all of us.

Cynthia Rhuddlan is a viscount’s daughter, and engaged to the son of an earl. Sadly, the son of the earl is pretty pathetic, but she still tries to work on their engagement with him. Then she remembers this is a game, and she’s one of the villainesses. And that Elly, the new girl who’s been muscling in on her fiance, is the “heroine”. Since her fiance suddenly no longer appeals, she tries to find another love interest who’s not already engaged, and comes up with Siraiya, the third son of a duke. He has a tragic abusive backstory, and if the heroine helps him he gets very attached to her… which can lead to a murder-suicide if done poorly! Can she try to win over this man, help him overcome his family, and get a happy ending?

Cynthia is very likeable, and is in the “highly competent” variety of heroines, so it’s nice to see she’s not immediately exiled or arrested, and she even breaks up with her fiance herself. A lot of this book requires negotiating the noble title arena, as well as who one can and cannot make a pass at. The game, tellingly, completely ignores all this, because only light novels are interested in delving into class warfare like that. Sireiya, meanwhile, is the sort of boyfriend who, once you give him a nice haircut, teach him things, and treat him like an actual human being rather than a tool, turns out to be nigh-on perfect. Her parents are understanding and supportive, and basically adopt her new fiance. The crown prince even helps after Cynthia accidentally solves his own tragic romantic subplot by virtue of her game knowledge. The outcome is not in doubt… even with rather pathetic villains.

This wraps up nicely, but there is apparently a Vol. 2, which surprises me. For genre fans.