The Disowned Queen’s Consulting Detective Agency

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By Sasara Nagase and Hatipisuwan. Released in Japan as “Kandō Sareta no de Tantei-ya Hajimemasu! Jitsu wa Bōkoku no Joōda Nante Naisho Desu” by Earth Star Novels. Released in North America by J-Novel Heart. Translated by Joshua Douglass-Molloy.

Sarasa Nagase is having a pretty good year. I’m the Villainess, So I’m Taming the Final Boss is ongoing both here and in Japan, and had a mildly successful anime. The Do-Over Damsel Conquers the Dragon Emperor is also ongoing in Japan, and will be coming out here from Cross Infinite World in a month or so. And then there’s this one-shot, which might become a series, about a young woman whose life starts off in a very familiar (for readers) way but then very quickly goes off the rails. In fact, the best part of this book may be the way that it slowly squeezes out backstory bit by bit. Now, you might say “Sean, the very beginning of the book has her conversing with her talking magical hat”, and you’d be right, but even so, I was expecting a bit more standard villainess stuff than this ended up being. I suppose villainess is like isekai now – you use it to get readers.

The book opens with Octavia, the young heir to the earldom, being kicked out of her family home for being illegitimate – or so it’s claimed. Octavia herself is pretty blase about the whole thing, mostly as she knows that her destiny lies elsewhere. She was raised by her late grandmother, who has just died (which prompts the disowning) but when she lived was a famous detective. Now Octavia is off to the big city to go live in her grandmother’s house filled with mysterious items… that is if she’s not ambushed on the way there. Fortunately, she runs into a charming and suspicious young man, Raven. Unfortunately, she also meets a charming and suspicious Phantom Thief, Crow. These two are absolutely not the same person, and you’d be a fool to think so. Plus there’s no evidence. In any case, together, they fight crime!

Actually, they don’t fight crime. Octavia is a magical detective, and her main job is to find Imperial Heirlooms and register them with her magic hat before they become Demonic Heirlooms, which can wreak havoc. And honestly, there’s only one actual case, which involves a little girl and her supposedly cursed doll. The first third of the book is about Octavia escaping her family and setting up shop, and the last third is about the family trying to destroy her (and failing, because this is not a downer sort of book). It’s decent – Raven/Crow is not really the sort of shoujo boyfriend that I enjoy, but I can tolerate him. Octavia is balanced between “serious minded” and “a bit flakey”, perhaps a bit more towards the serious, but she’s entertaining. There is also a police inspector, who has the only accent in the entire book, and it’s very distracting. He doesn’t go so far as to say “Crikey, guv’ner”, but it’s close.

There might be more in the series – the webnovel finished, but this only came out last year, so who knows? As a one-shot, though, it’s a good one for those who like ladies doing cool things, though villainess fans might not find enough here to satisfy them.

Chitose Is in the Ramune Bottle, Vol. 3

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By Hiromu and raemz. Released in Japan as “Chitose-kun wa Ramune Bin no Naka” by Gagaga Bunko. Released in North America by Yen On. Translated by Evie Lund.

One problem I have with reading light novels that are “high school romcoms”, is that I tend to regard them as taking place in “generic Tokyo suburb”. That’s actually rarely the case. There are a few exceptions – My Youth Romantic Comedy Is Wrong As I Expected will not shut up about Chiba long enough for me to put it anywhere else – but most of them fall into “generic place”. So I was a bit surprised with the subplot here, which is that our hero and heroine-of-the-book head off from their “big city”, Fukui, which has about 275,000 people, to Tokyo, which is 14 million people. I was even more surprised with the message that the story was giving us, which is that the big city can be awesome, despite its huge number of people and occasional creep. If your dream requires you to be in the biggest city in Japan, go there. Because chasing dreams is important. Even if it means giving up on a potential series-killing romance.

Our cast of second years are getting guidance from their seniors as to what to expect in regards to future plans, and one of those seniors is Chitose’s friend/crush Asuka. She has a dream of being an editor at a Japanese publishing house, but there’s just no way that you can do something like that in someplace like Fukui. Her parents are also dead set against it, and want her to become a librarian or civil servant. Chitose is determined to help her, even though he knows that her heading to Tokyo likely means that any relationship they might have would be dead in the water. So he comes up with an idea: visit Tokyo, and see what it’s really like, to find out if it’s overwhelming to her. Of course, to do that, he’s going to have to essentially kidnap her.

The back half of this book finally gives us the full backstory, with one exception, of Chitose, and we also see why much of it was elided – it was being saved for the book focusing on Asuka. I can certainly see why the author is writing Asuka out of the series (though she doesn’t quite leave for Tokyo yet, as it’s still months before graduation), as in a series that prides itself on Chitose balancing his “harem” of four girls fairly equally, Asuka is simply too powerful. That said, there are a few flaws here, The book is much longer than it needed to be, for one. And Asuka gaining all of her strength and coolness that we’ve seen in the series to date by essentially imitating the boy she liked may not sit well with some viewers, though Chitose is quick to point out that that sort of imitation is what everyone does, and eventually it becomes second nature.

In any case, Asuka may not be in Tokyo yet, but she and Chitose have “broken up”, which leaves him free to solve someone else’s problems in the next book. And that also seems to answer my question from last time about the plot of this series: Chitose solves problems, at great expense (his own).

Outbreak Company: Gaiden

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By Ichiro Sakaki and Yuugen. Released in Japan by Kodansha Light Novels. Released in North America by J-Novel Club. Translated by Kevin Steinbach.

This book feels like an apology, frankly. I was very grumpy with the final volume of the series, and judging by some of the reviews I saw on Amazon Japan, fans of the series there were also unhappy. So now we get the “Gaiden”, or “Side Story”, volume of the series, the actual final volume, and it feels like it’s giving fans what they wanted all along. Well, at least the first half is. The second half of the series is there to highlight Minori, who has always been the least developed character in the series (insert joke about her breast size here), but this final chapter allows us to see a BIT more into her inner psyche and how she really feels about things. Unfortunately, it’s still Outbreak Company, and she’s still Minori, so in the end the plot cannot quiet thread the serious needle and goes back to its running gag. But it tried. The first half of the book does a better job, and uses “fantasy world” as a way to resolve the love interests.

After the events of the final volume (minus the epilogue, which is thankfully ignored), Shinichi returns to the castle… to find Petralka announcing that she’s marrying him, and the wedding will be as soon as possible. Given that he struggled to make a choice and chose Myusel, he’s a little pole-axed by this. The nobility doesn’t like it either… and might also be the reason Petralka is pushing things. After this, we see the secondary pairing, as Hikaru very publicly confesses to Elvia… who still loves Shinichi, and is not really sure how romance works to begin with. A lot of awkwardness follows. Finally, a suitor arrives to marry Garius whether he likes it or not, despite his sexual preferences. Can he find a replacement? And what are BL lover Minori’s thoughts on all this?

Gonna be honest, even though I felt the book was trying to “fix” the last book, it only partly succeeds. The first chapter works best, being Shinichi focused, and with a good intrigue sideplot. I don’t mind the polycule resolution, and obviously the three of them don’t mind it either, though that’s more because we’ve seen it a LOT more in recent light novels. The Hikaru and Elvia story is hampered (as is the Minori story) by multiple narrators, and it’s not always clear who’s meant to be our POV until several paragraphs in. It also feels a bit too quickly resolved. As for the Minori story, as with a number of stories focusing on her in this series, it looks like it’s going to finally be serious and sober, and then heads down into BL alley again. Which is fine, it’s her gag. It just felt a bit too jokey for me. And the treatment of trans and gay issues is… attempted, I will grant you.

So a side story that’s highly variable, which I’m OK with because it’s a side story. A must read for Petralka fans, but for the rest of us it’s another reminder that this series was excellent and annoying in just about equal measure.